George Orwell said "Never use a metaphor, simile, or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print". We use clichés all the time when we are speaking because they are great for conveying a concept quickly. When you're writing a cliché is boring because you are not saying anything new (you're just repeating a cliché).
When you edit your writing, try and underline or highlight every cliché that you come across. Try to brainstorm a fresh metaphor to replace each cliché, for example, if you’re trying to replace “she was happy as a lark,” think of what other things are happy, or think of situations in which you are happy and magnify them. For instance, maybe you have a penchant for chocolate, which might lead to Charlie and the Chocolate factory, which might lead you to “she felt as if she’d just found Willy Wonka’s golden ticket”.
A good writer may create and reject over a dozen images before finding the right one, so don’t worry if it takes you a while.
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